Frozen I held my
breath
“You don’t really
know what to say”
The Boy Badly Burned As He Carried
His Grandmother From the Blazing Home
Courageous
behavior.
Fall seven times
I’m smiling but I’m
dying not to drag my feet
Donates 100,000 to Help With Tornado Relief
character.
Stand up eight
“They
feel the pain. They care and pay attention.”
Valor,
intrepidity, nerve.
I stumble there, along
the railings and the fences
I found a home for my
heart
“Bravery from the
heart”
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I really enjoyed the news story headlines for this newsreel because it helped clarify the message. Plus, it was enlightening to know that there is such good left in the world opposed to my newsreel. Also to I liked the news headlines you chose really give you the idea of the story with simply the headline. "I’m smiling but I’m dying not to drag my feet." This line sounds familiar but I don't remember where I've seen or heard it. I enjoyed the contrast that this line brought to the newsreel. Fall seven times and stand up eight? What exactly what are you trying to convey with these two lines. Great Job!
ReplyDeleteI really feel like you did an awesome job writing this newsreel. It showed how people are suffering through so much pain but through the pain there is still good. For example “Donates 100,000 to help with tornado relief”. Even though something horrible happened (tornado) people are doing anything they can to help out (donating money). I love how you used a mix of song lyrics and news titles as well. My favorite line in this newsreel is ”Fall seven times” “Stand up eight”. I really enjoy this, because no matter how many times you get knocked down, or how many hardships you face, there will be positives that come along after.
ReplyDeleteAs one reads about bravery, you can see what brave and courageous acts that people do in the time of helping others. The song lyrics help by emphasizing the actions of the people, whether it’s just one boy or if it’s 100,000 people. People show bravery in different ways and you show this with the result of the boy and his courageous behavior. I like the ending with finding a home for the heart and with the line “bravery from the heart”. These two lines help close what was a great newsreel and everything prior helped set up a perfect choice for an ending.
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