The Dance
Two girls during a summers night playing ball and telling secrets one more than
the
other best friends tell each other
everything sometimes more than
the
other best friends
keeping secrets
going out beating passing out lost
independent
every
girl for herself
helping each other with homework and playing pranks on the
teachers, we thought we were bad and no one knew how close best friends were or
not how close neither knew two halfs
make a whole she needed help but no one knew secrets come in many forms secrets do not
even know themselves
searching
trapped some type of love bushes
bottles of different kinds
trash the kind that gets
gave up on
secrets have been shared
help is being asked for can only
help when it’s really wanted and worked for
scared of rejection scared of life scared of being the best friend who
lost a friend best friends is
unconditional love unconditional
addiction babies secrets beyond measure searching to find
self love happiness love self
before the love of others wanting something so bad no means of getting
there progress
changes being made
hard times are tough tougher
without a best friend these secrets
were not her this life was not her best friend seemed to be unknown hidden
away for the time being unconditional
love
She’s a soldier in a war but in a pink flower dress
If there’s one thing that can change my world
It’s that sweet smile of that little girl
Always light at the end of the tunnel no matter how long it
may seem always a rainbow after a storm
and sun after a long dark light bad
things have happened but that is not what defines how the situation was handled defined a
relationship
laying in
room talking about good secrets goes to bathroom emerges a bad secret night ends early lay in bed best friends
forever sheading a tear
laying in
bed talking of old times will laugh and cry until die we die past will be the
past and remain a bad secret but from every bad secret forward
forward it went and two girls during a summer came home pig tails and juice boxes grown up out of
love good secrets came bad was tucked
away
no more secrets for the best
friends unconditional love faith
dependence relationship closer
bodies farther apart maid of honor smiles
hope for the future trust in
future trust in best friend truly a
best friend now and forever the dance
goes on
This camera eye is about my best friend and my relationship through
out the time we’ve known each other. Neither of us thought we’d still be best
friends after all this time. It tells the story of how secrets played a role in
our lives and how best friends will always be no matter what happens.
You did an awesome job with this camera eye. I loved how you used the word secret to talk about your relationship with your best friend. Every time I would read one line, I would want to keep reading to know what would happen next. This really kept me engaged and made me want to continue. I felt that this was very mysterious at times and then fun and playful during others. I also felt like I was in your shoes and it really reminded me of my best friend and I. You did a great job and had a very detailed and well written Camera Eye!
ReplyDeleteI enjoyed how you took a relationship so vivid to you that it was abstract to all of us reading. I could relate to your story with one of my old friends but unfortunately our relationship was not as strong as you and your friends. "Always light at the end of the tunnel no matter how long it may seem always a rainbow after a storm and sun after a long dark light" when I read this line I thought that is was a lyric to a song that I have not heard. This line explains to me that you and your friends relationship is a natural and is going unplanned like going through a tunnel and not knowing what is on the other side. I enjoyed how you played with spacing and I wish that I had read your camera eye before doing mine so that I would not be so afraid to play with spacing more. Job well done!
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